Sarah, Marek Halter
I like historical fiction and I remember enjoying The Red Tent by Anita Diamant.
The problem I had with this book is its simplicity. And I mean that in the way that the writing was simple and almost -- almost like something I would have read in an undergrad writing workshop. And of course that bothers me. Because I can't get a book to sell and I'm reading things that are more poorly written than my own novels?
The plot was interesting. I actually went and reread Abraham and Sarah's story in Genesis to compare, and Halter does a good job. He picks up way before Genesis does with them and elaborates on a lot. It's like he took the Bible and filled in the white space. Of course I wouldn't necessarily have told it and invented it the same way, but for the part of the story, it was interesting.
It was just -- it took my too long to get through because I thought the writing wasn't as good as it could have been. And that's horrible to say, but it's true.
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